March 19, 2010

10.6

Neruabald breathed deeply and sighed. The spring seemed to have just begun this far north, but Ethmar already hinted at smells of summer. 'Thirty-eight summers haven't dimmed the pleasure of that smell. Everything growing;' and to no one in particular, he added, 'but it has make riding somewhat less comfortable.' He dismounted, and the stable hand took his horse without comment, but Neruabald had to stretch for a long moment before his muscles consented to walking.

“There you are, I thought's they'd mistaken you for a horse and put a feed bag on your head.”

“You'll not be rid of this old man so easily, soldier. Is your master in?”

“First Citizen Eth is in his study, he's waiting for you, honored general.”

“Is he? That's too bad, I was hoping for a nap in his waiting room. Go on, show me in,”


Eth's castle had been designed by his father to inspire awe. Its towering arches and vast glass windows were carefully arranged to cast light on the throne at the head of the hall, and shine in the eyes of the guests without providing enough light to see by. Old Ethitorx's theory that the his government functioned best if the citizens were kept blind had application everywhere.

As First Citizen, Eth preferred to work from the small study room behind the great hall. It gave the impression, to the rest of the government, that he was a humble and simple man. Neruabald was not deceived. Eth was the king's son, and the reining monarch, whatever title he would take. Any election was pretentious, because no local leader could possibly muster support from the empire. Eth provided the people with a carefully worded 'referendum' from time to time; “Should we invade nation of barbarians who sacked the boarder town, or sanction their trade,” but the idea of opposing his rule remained foreign to the people. As first citizen, he was more emperor, more absolute, then King Crelocthen of Bharrak.

The study was an octagonal room with windows on four walls – apparently quite the fashion in Makhan.* Compared to the hall it was little more than a cabinet, but considerably more people crowded in. The tables were covered with charts and maps, and the whole place gave Neruabald the impression that a library's contents had been rapidly turned out as it caught fire. The space was equally filled with chatter as with paper, and Neruabald found the atmosphere disquieting.

Eth seemed quite at home in the raucous. He signed a new treaty with a client state here, and a then back to drawing up plans to feed the great army.

“Come over here, Neri, you should see it.” The young emperor showed great pages of tables to the gray-haired general. Figures and tables covered huge pages. Scribbled addition filled the margins. While individual numbers and the math in the margins was sensible, the bulk of the documents might have been written in elven. “See, we're doing something really unprecedented here. An army that can truly operate independently. With this,” he gestured to the documents, “the army will eat and march.”


“You intend to feed them paper?”

“I only like you for your humor, Neri.”

“To be honest, my lord, I do not understand these documents.”

“They're ration tables. Bakers and mobile kitchens will march right with, well, right behind, the troops. The men can eat like kings and march like pack hounds – not pack animals.”

“What will you feed them? Grain, I suppose, you can bring. But you'll have to forage for meat and fruit, or the men** will quickly grow weak.”

“Bring me a can,” Eth commanded a uniform behind him. In moments the lad produced a glass jar with a lid held on by loose metal hinges. It was a fine example of pottery, being of nearly transparent brown glass, and a lid that wouldn't be easily lost seemed advantageous to the old soldier. “Sir, I don't see what this will do.”

If you cook meats or vegetables inside a can, like this, they keep for months. The army can march with food that will last, and they can be supplied for a siege indefinitely, so long as we hold the roads. Why, we can unite the whole Goblin Nation in a summer or two. So? What do you think?”


Neruabald considered it briefly. “Genius, I think. If you can really supply an army without needing to gather anything, you can move faster than, and outflank other forces. ”

“Exactly!”

“But you didn't bring me here to look at dinner, First Citizen.”

“You went south with an army, Neri.” Eth stated the obvious.

“Tsorx's boys.”

“Yes, I've heard. Slaughtered, they say. And he with them. The old lady at Bharrak must still have some strength in her. No matter.”

“No matter? Two thousand dead and an ambitious general with them, you say no matter?”

“Tsrox's death serves the empire better than his life could have. Do you think he'd be content to challenge you alone as my second, or to wait for your death to replace you? There were rumors already that First Citizen might be a title to be passed on.”

“You sent him down there to die?”

“Not at all, that's why I sent you to look after him. He was supposed to give Putnmar and easy, early victory, then retire and be safely out of the way.”

“And out of public eye.”

“Now you're thinking politically.”

“Scheming, you mean.”

“You humor me, Neri! Yes, plotting, even. One must plot to be emperor, you know.”

“Henh.”

“Now tell me the truth, how did the army fail? My secret weapon is for the stomach, but what surprise do the southerners have for me?”

“My lord, they fell because of a rain storm. A druid,”

“A Druid!? So the rumors are true.”

“What rumors, my lord?”

“They say a man of magic is on the move in the south. Martialling all manner of armies to himself. So there is such a




*Political capital of dwarven empire. Some similarities to London and Rome.

** Yes, men. The sexual equality of the south has no hold here. Instead, strict labor division by gender is the norm, as it is in most elven and dwarven territory.

10.5

Nasch's fever broke about dusk, and during the second watch he woke up for a moment. He said “ouch, my head,” ate a spoonful of cold stew (druids apparently prepare most meals in bowls), and went back to sleep. Tyisch arrived in a fit about midnight. Krina almost tackled him.

“He woke up! Oh, Tyisch, just for a moment, but he woke up!”

Tyisch's foul mood evaporated in a moment. “Wizard be praised, he must be a troll. They said it couldn't be done.”

Aytheur had fallen asleep in the corner of the tent, curled up in a fetal position, facing away from the wall with his coat wrapped around him.

“Did either of you offer the doctor a blanket?” Tyisch asked. “Didn't he have a pack with him?”


At the insistence of Nasch's cousin, the elf's belongings were sent for and delivered some time before dawn. “Thank you,” Tyisch said to him, “you saved his life.”

Aytheur woke up very confused. “Would you tell that to these two? They seem to think I've killed him.”


Nerith found he had to explain his dream again. “It was one of the dragons, Zephanarai”


Aytheur suddenly took notice. “Zephi? Why, he's appeared to me also. Now I know what you're worried about; Zephi is a darned old fool, and you've nothing to fear.


“You would insult an ancient?”

“Yes, I would, when he ancient is wrong. Nasch will recover, his body will heal, and he'll live longer this way than if I did nothing. But did you forget that I told you there would be a cost?”


The Kliet found that statement had slipped their minds.

“What I have done to cure him, orcs do all the time. It is a great change, and one that cannot be reversed. It would shorten his life significantly if he were an elf – maybe ten years, or twelve before he becomes ill and cannot be healed. But he is a goblin, and a soldier. If he lives another twelve years he will be an old man. It is better to die then and perish now, is it not?”


Nerith nodded. It sounded good to him, and would let him forget about the dream. Krina wasn't going to be swayed so easily. “What about abomination? Did you curse him?”

“You superstitious, backward people. There are no curses, there is only reality. He is not cursed now, any more than he was when he got stabbed. Nasch isn't an abomination.”


“Well,” Nasch coughed, “that's... good to hear.”


The reunion was tearful and prolonged. For a while, all doubts were driven from their minds. Nasch was restored to him, from the very edge of death. Even Aytheur was moved to moisten his eyes by the emotion around him. All was joy, until Nasch announced he was ready to rest again.

“Before you go to sleep, dear cousin, I should tell you all. Layonia, the princess, is traveling to Ethmar with a dowry, hoping to marry Eth. Crelocthen wanted you to go as the wedding escort.* Hurry, and get well, and we can go with them.


Nasch slept again. That afternoon, the rain finally subsided, and the whole wedding party left immediately. Eldad Gomaesh took Kliet Nasch's place as preferred on the wedding escort, and he insisted they make haste. “Because we shall make no difference at all if we meet Eth with his army in the field.”


When Nasch was finally well enough to walk; it took two days; the Kliet went, with Aytheur, to meet the king.


*the key, but not only, military part of the wedding party.

10.5

The rain went on unabated for three days. For the first full day, Aytheur didn't move. About sunrise the second day he got up and allowed the Kliet to move Nasch into a real tent. By that night, Aytheur declared he'd done it.

“What have you done, Orc?” Krina and Nerith were playing cards. They'd been trading the same sixteen pennies back and fourth all day. The weather seemed to keep visitors away. Tyisch spent as much time as he could there, but duties of the festival kept him busy.

“I'm an elf. And he's cured.”

“Doesn't look cured,” she sneered.

“He'll get better.”


Nerith took the tall, frail-seeming elf by the arm, a little more forcefully than necessary. You'll come with me. You can eat, and if you're right, then we'll discuss the terms of your indenture.

I'll stay will him.” And she did.


The druid's residence politely welcomed Neither and Aytheur, as it had for last two days.

“What indenture?

“King's decision, yesterday, while you were... working.”

“I have done nothing but help since I arrived, and now I am to be made a slave? I should kill your captain, it would be justice! Do you not realize I came here to help you stupid people?”

“We stupid people! Your magic may be like an orc, but you have the forked tongue of an elf. Your tongue is killing you. Stop your mouth before it kills you.”


“What, so you can kill me quietly? Were it in my power.”

“Shut up!” Nerith nearly exploded. “No one kills you today. All right, you're not going to be hung. Until you screw up. You've been assigned to care of the Kliet. You'll stay will us. Under Krina's direct authority. You hear me?”

Aytheur only nodded.

“Now, what did you do to Nasch?”

“You say that like you're accusing me. What do you accuse me of?”

“I had a dream. I never dream, but I had one. In that dream, one of the Elders came to me, one of the dragons. He told me you were changing him.”

“What is your name?”

“What?”

“Your name. Are you Kliet?”

“Yeah, I'm Kliet. Nerith. That's my name.”

“And his name is Nasch, right? Do your names have meanings?”

“Does your's?”

“It does. It's a composite. It means 'son of my healing.' My father named me, but it was my mother's magic that made me.”

“what, you were made my magic? Aren't elves born?”


Aytheur laughed. A clean, natural sound. It echoed in his own ears and felt out of place. Nerith laughed too, nervously, because he didn't know if he'd insulted the mage.

“You really know nothing about elves?”

“I know you're weak immortals, and that fills you with pride.” Nerith bristled. “Touched by the dragons so you think you're better than everyone else, and you make war on everyone else. I know you torch the homes of your allies and sow salt in the fields of your foes. That you would have the all be death beyond your forests, so you might be at peace in a dead world.”

“Is that what you think of elves?” Aytheur was taken aback. “We aren't like that at all. We're basically peaceful people. Well, Ballea is, anyway. Threanace can be a little bloodthirsty. And we'll pay back evil for evil. But we'd never burn the homes of our friends or harm to land of a conquered people.”

“You wouldn't, no? Tell me, you who live forever, do you remember Uerd? I was there, I saw the whole land ruined. Your twisted vines grew into the walls of the orc city, your moss dug roots into the bricks and ruined them. Your poisoned weeds sprung up on the fields so that no one could eat the grain, even the animals became sick from the grass. I saw it, I was there.”

“what are you talking about? That was... four hundred years ago. You can't possibly have seen it, you're, what, fifteen? Twenty?” Aytheur tried to convert to goblin ages in his head. Nerith looked like a young adult, a little older than himself. Maybe thirty years old, if he were an elf.

“I'm twelve.”

“Then how could you have seen it?”
“I remember it.”


The druid's servant brought them four bowls of hot porridge on a covered tray. They stepped back out into the drizzle, and the conversation died.


“He'll be ok;” Aytheur tried to explain, when they were back inside the tent. “We should move him as little as possible, but his body has the strength it needs now. It is fighting a war, in his blood. Many tiny lives threaten Nasch's life. I strengthened Nasch's life. His body will fight faster, heal faster, and he can win the war in his blood. You should help me feed him, he needs his strength.”


Krina asked Nerith, “A war in his blood?”

“I don't know. He didn't explain. He is always rude.”


Aytheur pretended he couldn't hear them, and tried to feed Nasch. The goblin choked, then coughed until the porridge ran down his face, so Aytheur resign himself to making his patient drink instead.

10.4

Ayhteur kneels over Nasch's body. The patient is nearly lifeless, and the doctor is deep in trace. Magic flows invisibly from the druid's grove, from the land into the goblin. The elf is more than a conduit, he is the pilot of it. The spark that starts the first and the will which directs it.

There are no voices, but inside the head of the elf, as he is deep in the magic-commanding trance, a conversation takes place.

[This is the first such conversation I've posted, but I intend to write others if it proves effective]


Zephi: It is time we had a chat, young troll.

Aytheur: I haven't got the time right now, why don't you press your platitudes on me some other time?

Because this is the only time. You would not hear before this now [moment], and you will not be able to act after this now [choice].

Let me guess, the world's fate hangs on this one choice?

You spit upon the truth as you mock it.

He's one stupid goblin that's dying of gangrene.

You already suspect his importance.

Curse you, old man, why do you speak of my thoughts like you know them?

Why do you ask questions I have answered? We are[have been / will be] bound.

Why do you answer in riddles? Just tell me the simple truth.

You assume the truth is something that I know.

Bah! You're useless, leave off!

By healing this goblin, you ruin his future and set upon a course to ruin many more.

Ruin his future? He has no future, he's about to die. What are you talking about?

Every spirit has a future. If he dies, he's a martyr and a hero. You do this to him and he's an abomination.

He'll be alive, that's what I'm told to do. Who cares what kind of magic I have to use?

He'll care. Kliet Nasch will care, and it's his life.

How do you even know that?

That's not the right question. How do I talk to you while you trace?

Fine, if that's the wrong question, how about this one. Why should I trust you? Who are you even?


March 13, 2010

10.3

Seven times during the night Nasch vomited. Krina washed him, and forced him to drink the spring's water. The spring night was warm and heavy with moisture. The acolyte slept beneath a blanket at the far edge of the grove, beyond the small circle of torchlight. The druid Jinkash returned near dawn, while Aytheur still knelt motionless next to Nasch. Nerith had to explain their presence, but the druid paid him little attention. He muttered something about the Fusp being to stupid to accept the inevitable and retreated to cabin with glass windows just outside the grove.

The next day dawned cloudy and bleak. Tyish brought the Kliet food and tents, explaining it was likely to rain. The grove didn't really become light, even at noon, because the clouds grew steadily darker. The orc-healer never stirred, though Nasch became increasingly fevered and fitful.
“What do we do about them,” Nerith asked aloud, “when it rains?”
“We should put a tent over them,” Krina said.
Tyisch said “You can't – these tents have iron buckles.”
“We can't let him lay there when it rains.”
“Maybe we should,” Nerith suggested, “the orc-elf said he needed to be on the ground, outside.”
A thin mist-like rain descended on the forest as they argued. Krina eventually charged them both to bring the tent inside and set it up, but the acolyte saw what they were doing. He stopped them, saying they could not contaminate the grove with metal that had been smelted.*

But Krina persisted, so as the mist turned to drizzle, they removed all the metal fasteners and buckles from the tent. The weather gradually worsened while they worked. Soon Nerith, Krina and Tyisch were soaked, along with the acolyte and the two young Kliet guards. They finally erected a crude but kosher cover over the healer and his patient as the rain became a downpour and settled in to give the world a good soaking.
As soon as they were under cover, Nerith set to arguing with the acolyte for permission to build a fire and warm up. “Though expedient, it would not be permissible,” the druid's assistance insisted.

They were interrupted by Aytheur, who suddenly woke from his trance. He spoke angrily, but his tongue was thick from long disuse, and did not respond intelligibly. He stumbled a bit as he got up, and then further diminished the goblins' opinion of him by bumping his head on the cloth ceiling. This threatened to bring the ramshackle structure down on the group, and had Nerith laughing on the muddy ground.
“You can't have this shelter here. You've got to move it, it changes flows.”
“It's called a tent, ancient** fool. It keep the rain off,” Nerith said.
“I can't help your friend if you don't listen to me,” Aytheur raged.
“He'll die just as surely if you let him freeze in this rain,” Krina said, bitterly. “Your healing has been making him worse, and the chill will surely kill him.”
Tyisch again tried to mediate, “He needs to be kept warm, surely you can sympathize with that? Do the best you can with the magic available, because he'll only get worse if you care only for the wound and not the body.”

Aytheur silently, and perhaps sullenly, accepted this. He returned to Nasch. After he'd settled into the blood-magic trance, Nerith commented, “arse-muncher.”
Aytheur, without moving, replied. “I can still hear you, you should know.”
Nerith was suddenly embarrassed, but Krina added, “Still an arse-muncher,” to general amusement.
Aytheur found himself quite unable to devise a witty retort, and left them with, “Am I going to save this guy's life or should I just leave it to you clowns?” He returned his concentration to the task before they responded.

*To explain: copper and gold both occur regularly in relatively pure forms in nature, so druids consider them natural. Like rocks. Iron and steel do not occur that way, and thus symbolize something distinct from the natural world. Brass and Bronze are excluded for the same reason. Silver and electrum would be acceptable. Druids sometimes take this to an extreme and wear only animal skins.

** [immortal / a synonym of sorts for elf]

10.25

Zephi: It is time we had a chat, young troll.
Aytheur: I haven't got the time right now, why don't you press your platitudes on me some other time?
Because this is the only time. You would not hear before this now [moment], and you will not be able to act after this now [choice].
Let me guess, the world's fate hangs on this one choice?
You spit upon the truth as you mock it.
He's one stupid goblin that's dying of gangrene.
You already suspect his importance.
Curse you, old man, why do you speak of my thoughts like you know them?
Why do you ask questions I have answered? We are[have been / will be] bound.
Why do you answer in riddles? Just tell me the simple truth.
You assume the truth is something that I know.
Bah! You're useless, leave off!
By healing this goblin, you ruin his future and set upon a course to ruin many more.
Ruin his future? He has no future, he's about to die. What are you talking about?
What can you know about his future? Do you even know his name?
They called him Nasch.
His full name. His family
I don't know
The family name matters more than the individual name to the Wizard's people. Learn this.
Sure. We done now?
Let him die, let his family mourn their fallen hero, and they will have peace.

I can't let him die.
He was bound for death when you saw him, and you know what your healing will do to him.
The transformation I dance in his blood will let him recover.
And it will destroy who he is.
I'm tasked with keeping him alive. And anyway, what harm does it do?
By letting Kliet Nasch die, he will live. By reviving him, you kill him.
You gonna explain that to the savages? I promised to do this and I must – they'll stone me if I don't. And if I do as they ask, they'll accept me, and I can start to civilize them.
Would you destroy this innocent for that? Your means are a suffering, and you can not see the ends.
I would not kill this goblin on your word, old man.
So be it.

10.2

“He's almost beyond reach,” the blood-mage proclaimed. Nerith must have been dozing off, he never heard the elf (or is it orc?) approach. While the day had come and gone, the exhausted Kliet kept watch in turns over Nasch's healer. They remained immobile the entire day, with the exception of a foul ooze that leaked from the wound in Nasch's side. The goblin healers had done their best to cauterize and seal the wound, and it had stopped bleeding much earlier. It seemed a degradation of condition. “Well? Are you ready sleeping or are you ready to act?”
“We're awake, orc.” Nerith snapped, putting the Kliet before the guest intentionally. “Do not patronize us; You'll not blame your failure on us.”
“My failure? This goblin was so near death when I saw him, his fingers were already black with the dirt. His body was broken long ago, and even now his spirit fails; Were it not for me, your Nasch would be gone already!”
Krina was awake now, “You bled him, I saw; and what cure have you worked? Nasch turns ever closer to a corpse while you are motionless over him!”
“How can I teach such barbarians the ways of medical science? His blood became poison to him, through his wound, tiny life eats his life. That is why I opened the wound. Now listen to me!”
“No, you listen. You are twice the Wizard's blood enemy, both elf and orc. You deserve death for the crimes of your clans [nations]. Yet we show mercy; You have your life only while Nasch has his.”
“Fine. Kill me, if you can. Nasch dies with me; if I do not act he will pass before the moon rises.”
Tyisch entered the room from his chamber, behind Aytheur. He had been all day at the festival, and seemed to have aged years in that time. “To save Nasch, what must we do?”

“The energy of Nasch's life passes out of him; He must be moved somewhere green. Somewhere full of life, that I might restore his strength. The tiny life, the parasites, consume him now...”
Krina cut him off. “He is very sick, we know. We'll move him where ever you tell us; now shut up.
“The druid's grove,” Tyisch stated. “A place green with life? There is no better place, it's magic is well known.”
Krina took over. “Nerith, go tell the guards at the gate we're moving Nasch and the orc.”
“Elf.” Aytheur said.
“Whatever,” Krina dismissed him. “Tyisch, can you help me get the litter?”

In minutes they were prepared to leave. Nerith insisted on helping carry Nasch, rather than letting the guards do it. Krina collected torches to light their way, and Tyisch sent one of the serving girls in his employ to run ahead and tell the druids they were coming. Aytheur watched the bustle, an out of place island in the activity of this goblin household. They turned to his instruction, but gave him no consideration.
The last of the sun's light faded from the horizon; somewhere, back that way, stood Belliea and the life he'd run from. The city elves had no place for the orc-blood Elrodore. Even the other Elrodore, the gatherers of the deep forest, despised Aytheur because of his father. Clouds covered the moon and the stars, pushing in low like a smothering blanket. Having reached Bharrak, Aytheur realized he was less alone when in the desert.
Krina and Tyisch's torches stood off against the night as the little band made their slow way to the Druid's Grove. The road consisted of hard dirt, a thin path marked by wagon wheels of varied sizes. It stood slightly north of the city, in a dell below the crest of a wooded hill. No one talked. The feeling of a funeral procession dominated the short journey. Tyisch explained to passerbys, in short words, that they moved Nasch for treatment, not burial.
The inky night only grew worse when the road passed under the canopy outside the grove. Torch light cast flickering shadows, which seemed to Krina to dance with Ethian soldiers. The girl they'd sent ahead met them there.
“The Druid Jinkash is not here, he is away, but he said you are welcome. He's gone to draw up water for you, from the spring.”
The grove was marked by wooden doors, inlaid with green copper and gold in ivy patterns, set in a thick hedge. Even to Aytheur, the place felt old. The trees here, just outside, hung heavy with moss. Tyisch told the girl to return home, and thanked her with a coin.
An acolyte carrying two buckets on yoke greeted Tyisch. “whatever your orc needs, I'll supply if I can. M'lord Jinkash is out on pressing business, and I don't know when he will return. I'll take your weapons;”
Each of the goblins surrendered a short sword and knife, but Aytheur balked at the idea. “Give up my sword?* This is all I have to defend myself, and you'll set upon me the moment he's healed.”
“If you don't give it up, we'll set upon you now.” Krina growled.
“No iron is permitted inside the grove,” the acolyte explained, “it would disturb the grove. You must leave them here.”
Relutantly Aytheur gave up his sword. The long, thin elven blade didn't fit in the slots on the shelf because it was nearly twice the length of a goblin sword. The acolyte marveled at its craftsmanship, but had to lead it against the shelf.
Once inside, the forest changed utterly. Where outside the trees with oaks and hazels with dark bark, these were silver birches. Their white bark shone in the torch light. Lamps were not permitted here, but Aytheur decided not to complain about the light. They laid Nasch in the center of the grove, on a flat rock which sometimes served as an altar for the druids. Aytheur knelt over him, and, without explanation, closed his eyes to re-enter the blood-dancer's** trance.
*[I don't remember mentioning that he even had a weapon before, but it occurs to me that I'd like to highlight the difference between elven and goblin technology, so I think I'll write this in. It fits, seeing as he went to a military school before setting off to the wilderness. This edition of the work is about finishing the story, I'll repair plot holes and bad ideas on the third go.]
**[Yeah, I use a different word for this every day. Elves connect magic with music, so they call the life-magic they use on plants “singing.” Similarly, Aytheur thinks of orcish blood magic as dancing, although the term would be unusual.]

March 07, 2010

10.1

“Tell us of your fallen leader, Kliet.” one of the nobles requested. “How did he die?”

“He didn't die,” Krina bristled.  

“He lives yet? Where is he?”

“Nasch recovers in the manor of Tyisch, his cousin,” she said. The noble bristled at this, because she put Nasch ahead of Tyisch, the commoner before the noble.

“I understand he was wounded beyond the skill of every physician in Bharrak to heal. Is this not true? Did you not dismiss the last this very morning?”

“Crelocthen, my gracious king, replaced them all. He presented a blood-healer from elven lands, who, even now, heals my captain.”

“Ha! I can see your foolish falsehood. What hope have you in an elven blood healer? Everyone knows blood magic belongs to the orcs alone.”

“To the orcs, yes, but not alone. Elf and orc were once one people; some are born with the other's blood even now. That is why he is an exile.”

“Then he will become an abomination!” The noble's mouth seemed permanently fixed in a sneer.

“No!” That elbow came to her side again. This time, Krina caught a tiny motion of the king, directing the hand of the huskarl. He was listening to her argue! “He will live, that is enough.”

“He has fallen, let him rest,” the noble said, “do not twist his life or deprive his spirit its fate.”

“He's not dead yet. The victor of Fuspmar, the first to face Eth...”

“Clan Redhorn is the first to fight, the first to charge!” The noble was on his feet.

“Not this time, you weren't!” Krina jump up after him. The benches rocked as others scrambled to get to their feet, or at least avoid being stepped on. 'so that's his beef. Your clan is minor now. And dwindling.”

The noble, he must be either Gathar, or his son (whatever his name was), laid his hand on his sword's hilt. Probably the son, rather than the patriarch.  A short indigo cape had covered the blade, and the man threw it back with a flourish.  The noble had a southerner's face, being very angular and completely bald.  

“Draw it, Gunthar, and you'll not need Eth's army to face a battle.” The King interrupted. He stood up, and there was a sound like rolling thunder as every boot in the hall hit the ground. Then he looked directly as Krina and said, “please, escort her elsewhere.”  

The huskarl at Krina's elbow led her outside, then to one of the bottom floor of one of the castle's towers, where they would not be overheard. “The king honored you by inviting you,” the huskarl began. His northern heritage was plain, as his hair [scalp and facial] was quite thick, black and relatively straight. In this close proximity Krina found it unsettling. It was at least as bothersome as his apparent rage. “He had planned an important mission for your Fusp. It won't happen now.” 

Krina could almost hear the huskarl say, 'fool.' “His daughter, Layonia, is assembling a bridal party. They're going to Wapanix. To Eth. Our best hope to win this war is not to fight it. Any fool can see that. And Nasch's Kliet was perfect for the task; a victorious soldier is always respected. But now Gathar will have his way. His pompus son will be escorting the bride's party, and the dowry... the odds of Eth accepting fall drastically. The king will do it anyway, Layonia set herself on it. But you'll have no part. Get out of here, go see to your dying captain. Keep the blood-healer away from anyone important, and try not to screw anything else up.” The huskarl turned to leave, then added, over his shoulder “at least we found out you're incompetent before you were assigned anything important.” For the moment, she was too stunned to cry.

10.0

“In the beginning all was ignorance,” the Druid Jinkash intoned.
“The elder ones taught us thought,” the assembled elders replied, following the same sing-song of the chant.
“In the beginning the land was ice. Men were wolves against the herds and against each other.”
“The elder ones taught us peace and construction,*”
“They took away the teeth of men so we might live with elves and devils**.”
“The elder ones wanted construction without warfare.”
“But the nephilim*** coveted rulership.”
“The elder ones instructed peace, by logic, as the way.”
“And so warfare came upon all lands.” Krina joined the chant, from the doorway. By her appearance, she had prepared for the feast hastily. While not sweat-stained, she still looked better prepared for a day's march and a pitched battle than a day of celebration.

*language note, construction is literally “city building,” and means civilization. The same word is both a noun and an intransitive verb. As a verb it means something like 'be civilized.' The term is also roughly equivalent with progress.
**Meaning dwarves. I may have failed to indicate the proper goblin-dwarf relationship. Using this word for dwarves in the old goblin tongue should help clarify it.
*** I had some trouble with old troll/new troll word choice, so I'm replacing old troll with nephilim. The meaning and intention fits better.

“The nephilim were stronger than all.”
“The People of the Wizard were near-destroyed.”
“But the elder ones could sanction no extinction.”
“So the Nephilim were banished.”
“And the elders promised they would never again interfere with the course of nations.”

So the story was told. It followed the announce-response pattern through the earliest history. These true stories serve the people like myths because no myths were available. Civilization started for the four sentients with the dragon's belief in the rational. The world of the mind, of spirits which grow to deities, of nature explained in terms of element-controlling personalities, never grew up. It was strangled in the crib. The explanation for all knowledge walked right there on the dirt, and denied before all people that such a thing as godhood existed. Denied, at once, all life but the present. Then achieved immortality by taking on an inanimate object and possessing – or sharing possession of – a member of the lower species.
The scene would repeat in homes throughout the goblin city, except only the most ancient stories were in paired-lines. Most were told by the head of the household,

One of the king's attendants signaled to Krina, and she was presented a seat at the primary table. She couldn't decline the invitation, it was such an honor, but it took an act of will to walk to greater table. 'Like a fish in the desert [in Ptah]*;'
*An idiom. Ptah is an arid land in the vicinity of Morketal.
The great hall was arranged with one long table running the center, and four shorter tables around the outside. Soldiers, attendants, artisans, and minor nobles would be seated at these. Krina was not prepared to join the King's personal table, with members of his household, key Huskarls. No place for grunts. But Crelocthen addressed her personally.
“Do you know the story of Gallifret? I think you should tell that one next.”

Krina wanted to say “I'm not really sure how it goes.” But you just don't say that to the king. He asks you to do a thing, you try it away.

“Gallifret marched to war on the Tordak*,
With bright-bronze the lads of Jaro* are clad,
Their shins and their crests are as the noon sun,
Their shields painted with the red rattan fruit,
And their spears tipped with red, as though
Blooded already.”

*City-states in the southern territory. Jaro's capital would eventually become Kael-Monjaro, before it was absorbed in the Corsair's empire. The story is not one that Bharrak brought down from the north, but one they've adopted in their time.

The poem built on itself, and Krina found it easier to continue than it had been to start.

“In the land of Tordak the skull-facéd
warriors made ready their spears; Their shields
of black-heart oak, enchanted by the elves
were stronger than bronze, and stronger than iron;
Their sword-claws welded to their hands, and tusks
protrude from their lips.”

“The brave lads of Jaro approached the wall,
'We challenge you, orc-kind, face us or die
in cowardice.' The skull-facéd fighters
answered them with arrows, and so cut down
the best and the eldest of the army...”
Krina, unwisely, looked up and realized quite a few eyes were on her. Too many eyes. Someone touched her elbow, probably trying to reassure her. She jerked away.
“...of Jaro; and left the lads.”

“Then the skull-faced fighters stormed out from their
stronghold; ten thousand strong. Then Jaro's lads,
said 'here we must stand, lest we be destroyed.'
Gallifret, the youngest, stood in left flank;
Each shield high, the phalanx hoped to repel
individual might with unity.

“The skull-faced fighters tore into Jaro.
Spear splintered, shield shattered; terrible strength;
the line could not hold. 'Back,' they cried, 'fly or
perish,' and the lads of Jaro fled. But
not Gallifret.

“He had no spear, his helm was split, but he
raised an orc-sword from the fallen and fought
as they fought him; Fury beyond blood or
muscle, more than bone could bear he fought with.
Alone he stood against them.

“And there he fell, Gallifret the mighty
but not invulnerable. Yet he piled
bodies of his foes as a wall about him.
The last to fall, he saved the lesser men,
that we might sing his name today.”

Krina finished the recital. It wasn't quite right, of course, but it was close. She did her best to become invisible. She did not succeed.

9.7.1

[in order for this to work, I have to explain how Ket got caught. That retarded bit with falling down the great stair can be edited out. Instead Ket is captured earlier, and we can get some information revealed through basically standard monologuing. I feel like the reader might not understand these events in their proper context otherwise. Later on, I'll have to bend the plot to fit.]

The heavy door to the druid's private chamber within Bharrak Keep banged shut. The room, while not large, was decorated lavishly and lit with many lamps. The elder druid's fine cream robes and emerald sash (a symbol of rank) contrasted vividly with the simple, dirty garments Ket wore.
“A drought upon you, Ket!” Jinkash raged. “Do you have any concept what you have done?”
“Have I accidentally lengthened the growing season in the south? Maybe caused a far-away island to suffer a dry winter? Could it be I have actually made the great desert a tiny bit dryer by this storm?”
“Don't be insolent. We do far more than look after the rain, we look after the people. A king alone does not make the land, nor to the people. We are the only unity men have ever had, and we must stand aloof! It will be the sea-kings war again, can't you see it? I should have you drawn!” Jinkash's head seemed quite ready to explode, but he forced himself to calm. “As you seem to be aware. Fool! Running off in a peasant's clothes, where would you go? You are the hero here, would you run to the hands of your enemies to find comfort? Yes, they would offer you a bed, certainly. One beneath the dirt, not warm but quite cozy. Or did you seek to beg forgiveness of Chartamnet? You think Kael-Monjaro has weight still, and they would waste their influence to save you?” When Ket hesitated to reply, Jinkash shouted again for him to speak. Spittle sprayed the younger druid.
“I sought work as stormcalmer.”
“A stormcalmer! So you'd flee to the navy of the orcs? Has Ujardtis too little power, than you would throw your lot in to even their odds? They're driving Cafaria back at every turn. How many wars would you foil, boy? How many of Morketal's careful plans would you undo?
“I never got your message. Your reply. I begged to help them, but you never said no.”
“Oh, I didn't? Fancy that, I saw the message there. Yes, it arrived in more than enough time for your to stop your little disaster. The huskarls took it, yes I know, the messenger avoided the flood. But somehow you didn't receive it. Very convenient, I'm sure. But now you've trapped us. Don't you understand the doom we're facing?” Jinkash crossed the chamber with long strides and banged twice on the door. A guard entered, not part of the king's huskarls but a common soldier who could afford only a leather tunic. “Where is Goleph? Go and get him. I do not want to be misunderstood.”
Jinkash turned to Ket again. “I formally strip you of your rank. As you have so appropriately removed your garments already, there is no further ceremony to be preformed. You are no longer a druid, but the oath to Morketal which you once swore binds you more tightly now than ever.” Ket said nothing, so the older goblin continued. His raving passed blankly into rambling. “The Order is more important than any king – or any emperor. We are not above politics, but above such expression of them. So long as the Order survives, the people survive. Do you understand? Eth strands ready to wipe us out. Not some miserable tribe, bereft of lordship over clans and turned instead to pig farming. The whole of the goblin world turns on his axis, and you would oppose him? Do you think you would win this war in one battle?”
“It could be negotiated. Crelocthen has a position of strength, now, they can bargain with Eth.”
“Bargin! Eth bargins with those who have no position, he crushes those who show backbone. He will chew up Bharrak and vomit the pieces upon Morketal. At best. No, you have not won the war against Eth, but you have ruined a far greater war.”
Now Ket was confused.
“Here! See the extent of your crime!” Jinkash produced a letter from a small drawer in his writing desk. Booted feet tramped in the hall, and Ket hurried to read before the Huskarl Goleph arrived.
From Chartamnet , Druid of the Second Order, in reply to Jinkash, Embarrary of the Permant Order of Druids to Bharrak, High Druid of the Third Order.

My friend, I know your heart is with the people you have served for so long. Bharrak has a special relationship with the Wizard, and its people a special place among the Wizard's People. This will always be. They do not possess the constitution or the momentum the Wizard's People need now. The expansion of Uerd is well known. The unity of so many orcs, once warring states, to Knruerd is slowly being realized. But the extent of their power and the threat of their intentions is known by very few. This is the new Ured, the black-hearted empire revealed. Their oligarchs have become decisive: the blood-mages are superior to every other species. A species to themselves, and all lower forms can hope, at best, to be their slaves.
“I don't understand,” Ket said. “What does this have to do with me? I've done nothing to help Ured.”
“You have. You have betrayed your species. War will be upon us soon, and goblin-kind must be united to have a chance at survival. The new Uerd is out to exterminate any who might fight. They will keep some as slaves only to appease the elder ones – in case the Dragons might return and treat Uerd like they did the empire of Nephilim.”
Ket saw the horrible decision. “You Monsters! You accuse me of breaking the ancient neutrality. but the order shattered it long ago! How long have you planned our demise.”
“Listen to yourself, Ket. You are of the Order. More importantly, you are a Goblin. Eth must win this war, do you understand? There is no other choice. Bharrak must fade quietly. Their allies will desert them, their armies surrender in mass; There must be no question of the victor, not the slightest doubt of Eth's conquest. And then, as many as possible must be made ready. The Corsairs are failing. They have already failed, do you understand? There is nothing they can do to prevent Uerd from landing, now.”

Jinkash summoned the guard again. “Find somewhere for Ket to stay. He is to remain within Bharrak until further notice, do you understand?”